Monday, February 6, 2012

Essay Concerns

my concerns:
Length
arguments and if they make sense
relating the ads and arguments to my thesis

1 comment:

  1. Like my paper the length does need a little work. Your arguments were very well developed, since there was not much going on in both of your ads it was probably hard to create arguments, but with what was available to argue you did make good stances for your arguments.

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