The issue in this essay is that of social networking and the use of cell phones and its effect on our everyday lives, positive and negative. The importance is explained through providing background on how much our society has changed since the invention of these websites and smartphones. The 4 perspectives given are that of school professors, children and young adults, the manufacturers and lastly parents. The thesis introduces that the author will explore the positive and negative effects and those in which these products are influencing. The different perspectives are very identifiable. Starting with educators and professors the author explores the positive and negative effects of cell phones and social networking in the classroom. Next the author speaks of young teens and children’s parents view on the situation and how they find them as a distraction. The most important people in this issue, the teenagers, are next in giving their perspective on the issue and lastly the author explores the manufacturers and creators and their view on how their product may be beneficial or distracting. The introduction is effective into leading to the topic by providing background information then has a smooth transition into the thesis which is well explained in the intro paragraph. The author then closes the essay with a well thought out conclusion that reviews all of the different viewpoints. Overall the essay is quite effective, it presents 4 different viewpoints that are very different and very important to the issue of social networking and cell phones in our world today.
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